Too dark, you can barely make out the contest source at all. A full moon that close would provide a LOT more light, and would give a strong back light "halo" around the building at the very least.
author says:
ok i guess indeed it was a bit to dark, changed it now and made a halo around hope its better now
Author it's a good image, I'm just trying to figure out where the lantern came from and why, if she's a ghost, why would she need it to light her way? I think if you did as MossyB suggested with giving more of a glow off the moon, it would bring the image together a little better IMHO..I would say too you could make her a little more transparent..I like what you're trying to do with the image Best of Luck
author says:
thx christy for ur comment, but the lantern is just to create some effect, its a fantasy image so imho its not taht important why she needs the lantern or not, and what mossy recommended i already did that ( see my comment under mossy's)
can see where you were going with your ideas,, i know how hard it is to bring them to the page.. not a bad image over all.. however, i do agree with previous postings.
Thanks to emik at pxleyes.com for the texture photo used in background. Weather vane is my own photo, and the rest of image is created from source photo. (5 years and 2988 days ago)
The canvas texture is too dark, so it doesn't look like "real acrylic watercolor on canvas." It just looks like too heavy a digital canvas texture.
Also the trees on the side have no texture or paint effect, so they just look like pasted on tree distortions.
It's an interesting digital technique, it just needs a bit more polishing to not look quite so artificial.
Yes, acrylics are indeed water soluble, and you can paint with them on canvas. Watercolors are of course also water soluble, but are mostly used on watercolor paper, not canvas as the title of this image implies.
Really nice manipulation. The boat needs to be a bit more "in" the water (it looks like it is slightly above it along the bottom edge), but overall this is very creative and well done!
Too dark, you can barely make out the contest source at all. A full moon that close would provide a LOT more light, and would give a strong back light "halo" around the building at the very least.
ok i guess indeed it was a bit to dark, changed it now and made a halo around hope its better now
Author it's a good image, I'm just trying to figure out where the lantern came from and why, if she's a ghost, why would she need it to light her way? I think if you did as MossyB suggested with giving more of a glow off the moon, it would bring the image together a little better IMHO..I would say too you could make her a little more transparent..I like what you're trying to do with the image Best of Luck
thx christy for ur comment, but the lantern is just to create some effect, its a fantasy image so imho its not taht important why she needs the lantern or not, and what mossy recommended i already did that ( see my comment under mossy's)
can see where you were going with your ideas,, i know how hard it is to bring them to the page.. not a bad image over all.. however, i do agree with previous postings.
Congratulations....nice work
Congrats, very nice work
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