How have you used the given source image here?

Its her face

looks anatomically incorrect, you might like to work on that a bit, gud luck

The edges are too harsh, you should soften them a little.

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Distorted from the belt down, her left arm needs a highlight.

Very quirky author... I keep peeking at this entry.. it's odd, but wonderfully fun.. good luck Love the hair

the left arm is out of proportion compared to the rest of the body

The girl looks very flat and doesn't really go together with the background