Now he's inside a giant gun sight?

The circle with the gun sight is what he is looking at, through the gun's window. He is not inside the gun sight. At least it is my version. You know.... these crazy ideas. Thanks for comment.

Nice job, except the stick support on the right intersects the spider leg and makes it look like the spider has one extremely long leg in the front.

The fact that the wolf is looking directly at the viewer makes this especially creepy. Yikes...somebody get a broom!

very nice......

thanks! 6man...................

Nice entry, maybe you should increase the distance of the spider shadow IMO. Good luck!

Background spiders should be as blurry as background web.

Nice concept but IMHO background is too much blury. Good luck!

The spiders look too cut and paste, floating in front of the webs, rather than being part of them.

Thanks for comments. Made the web sharper. Mossy, thanks!

Better now, nice change!

Gives me chills just looking at it.

nice simple and i like the picture sepia tones...i'm not that certain about the spider though, it seems as if its position takes away the prespective of the umbrella. i think it may be the shadow cast on the inner part of the ubrella. looks like the umbrella is inside out

It's a parasol. They are much flatter than umbrellas. Check the shallow angle of the ribs, and also the shadow of the support strut.

Color is great! I love the expression of the gal...everything is so mundane and ho hum...the inevitable is about to happen! I love images that depict something before it actually does! Nice work, author!