Good image, but either she's too big or the horse is too small.

I think the ponney is too little. Good use of the source image.

thank u for ur comments,but i did it in a hurry..lol,was scared i wudnt finish on time. I dont think i'll have time to correct the errors now

Ok, let's make believe it's a mini ponney (smaller than a ponney).
Nice image (a bit cruel, but nice)

Author, you have until the contest ends tomorrow to post a revision.

The idea is kind of funny (woman's reaction), but the horse makes the scene too serious. Now I think, poor horsey, he's killed .... If it was something like a unicorn it was still kind of cruel but more in a fantasy way/surrealistic, I think it would have looked more like black humor. Just my opinion though. Good luck!

The smoke brush would look more effective if the newspaper looked like it was burning somewhere. As is, there is no real source for the smoke.

Creative use of the source. A nice change up from the pack! It would be nice if you could possibly curl the paper to more of the contour of what the face would provide. Nice work, nonetheless!

The shadow on the right has no real source, since the image is so brightly illuminated by the sun, and it is inconsistent with the fan in front of her face.
Likewise, the shadow behind the fan edge on the left looks out of place and too contrived.

There is a dark line around the edge of the shoulder, and the shadows are inconsistent and too contrived looking. There is no source for the odd, soft edged shadow on just the side of the face in such bright illumination, and the fan shows a very fake shadow edge behind it, which simply would not exist with the sun shining from above.

You need to reposition the mouth!

Very nice work here!!
Good luck, author!

Joints just look drawn on, not functional.