Give the eyes some highlights. Otherwise, not bad. Would be better if you had posted a hi-res image. You still can.

The guy in the forground is blurry, while the guy in the back is in sharper focus than he should be for "proper "depth of field." Perhaps you should reverse their positioning...

oh for sure ... you are 100% right but I lack drawing skill so the pic would be too cut up, I might try to work on it a bit more later, as of right now just getting ready to head out to my first love, Hockey .... Thanks for the comment and have a kick a$$ day!

The middle head is out of focus compared to the other two, and too large compared to the foreground head.

Already been pointed out thanks

I'll work on this one again tomorrow ... Out for more Hockey

I'm just not feeling this contest, Nothing really creative is coming to me .... not a very inspiring weekend.
Good luck to all!