author, if you placed your original image in the SBS and explained why you changed it that might help... I like this image, it's very nice and has a great feel.. good luck.. every body changes their mind.. it's the way of the world hehehe
author says:
Eladine sorry for that, ! i did the two images with the same original picture deformation only i changed the model and after the background, i will provide a sbs as soon as possible ! Thanks for your comments
Icame back to this entry because its so cute and if you use a large soft black brush on the roof of the car to add more shading then the roof looks more rounded first selct the roof tho so you dont have to erase all arround
author says:
Thanx a lot coming back was the best way to compliment some1s work....
I made a lil change with the roof hope it's fine now.. :P
This is a pretty good looking piece of work, I like your creativity and color choices. I think you might want to check the perspective though. Try using the free transform/skew tool. I'm going to hold my vote for the time being. Great effort, try adjusting the perspective a little, I believe that will put it over the top.
I think im missing out some shadows.
The "tires" should also cast a shadow onto the vehicle.
Same for the things wich are standing at the front of the vehicle.
I also think the tires wich are on the back side ( photowise; aka the side we dont see ) should be placed more to the front. If you draw the lines you can easely messure out where it should be placed.
Also the reflection could use some work. The tires reflection of the tires wich are on the back side ( photowise; aka the side we dont see ) should be touching the real ones.
To do this reflection. You could simply cut the image into a few pieces, use free transform with all the options aviable, to make it look right. The side we as the viewers see, can be one piece, as long as there is no depth. So thepart where u are looking into the vehicle should be another piece, and transformed again. Then you can place them together to make it look good.
It's a pretty difficult task to get it perfect.
I hope it helped you make this image even better.
Good luck.
author says:
Thank you all for the valuable comments... they did help me learn a few new things...
i tried making all the changes possible.. hope it's fine now
do let me know if it still needs some change cheers
Cute is right....I just have a (hopefully) helpful criticism.
The perspective issues are being created by the floor being at a different angle than the car. The car persp. is actually 'shallow' while the floor is 'deep'.
If you draw a straight line from the close rear wheel to the same spot on the far rear wheel, then compare it with the line of the floor board you will see what I mean. The floor can be adjusted by either using the perspective transform tool, or by simply squashing it with the transform tool... You know which one is best once you try each....
I hope you take this only as a positive comment and not anything negative.
Here's a pic of that may explain it better....hope I'm not breaking any rules with this.... it just helps explain it better than words..
http://imageshack.us/f/192/toycarcomparison.jpg/
cheers
author says:
Your (hopefully) helpful criticism was actually (very) helpful... lol...
Thanx for not only commenting but also taking the time to edit n show me where i went wrong.. I've made the changes, hope it's better now
Looks much more grounded now.... more than happy to help.
The pic I added saved me a thousand words...hahaha.
It does, however, look a bit floaty with the reflection slightly off. May I suggest you move the reflection just up and to the right a tad... it's only a matter of pixels, but it may help; and maybe experiment with reducing the opacity just a little bit... (The degree of opacity will actually be the thing that dictates how shiny your floor is..)
in step 5 i see a very intriguing character .. but it is your vision.. good luck, unique image
author says:
I made alot of different things using the source image, one of them would be the : itruguing character" seen in step 5. Also i made alot of flowers and a few more animals. I just did not want to put all of them in the image. As that would be overkill in my eyes. Personally i like it best, this way.
And for step5: thatsjust a bonus, wich i wanted to show aswell. i just put it in there in 2 seconds and added the text to thank people for taking the time and watch the step by step.
To be honest I like the character in step 5 mentioned by Drivenslush (thnx for noticing that) more probably because it brings the image in a better balance. Now at the middle left side of the image you have a whole lot of water where nothing happens, there's nothing to see yet it drags your attention away fro the things you created.
author says:
I choose to have this setup, because for me this gives a peacefull feeling. No stress, no chaos just space and creatures flying swimming walking. Doing their own thing.
That's what it means to me and thats how i want people to see it. Even tho it can be hard to see it this way, because the world we are living in is made into an often stressfull, chaotic world.
Keyword: "often".
Thanks for your comment.
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Is very cool entry,
but where is the entry that I voted on? You have 3 entry openings total why not use those? My vote and evaluation on the original work is wasted now
author, if you placed your original image in the SBS and explained why you changed it that might help... I like this image, it's very nice and has a great feel.. good luck.. every body changes their mind.. it's the way of the world hehehe
Eladine sorry for that, ! i did the two images with the same original picture deformation only i changed the model and after the background, i will provide a sbs as soon as possible ! Thanks for your comments
This very accomplished work, luck
its all right, the moderators alowed me to change my vote, which is a good thing for both of us
congrats
Congrats, nice work
Thanks to all !
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