Yep...this is really cool. Love the style and image overall. My only suggestion to you is that you perhaps change the top lips a bit in shape and brightness. Perhaps darken the top lips since they are further away. Maybe blur them more to create depth of field. Maybe you could distort/warp them slightly to look less like the same lips copied and pasted. Ya know? These are just suggestions to possibly create depth and improve. I really like what you've done, author! Really nice work.
Nicely done, any SBS??? so we can see your process?
author says:
I had an SBS but I accidentally deleted it. I will repost it a little later today.
author says:
Ok the SBS has been "re-uploaded". I must have hit the delete this guide button without knowing. Sorry about that everyone. Thanks for pointing that out loopyluv!
Very interesting... might I suggest making the whites of the eyes a bit less intense; dropping the transparency or the saturation (like the teeth) might help this look even more convincing...
Only saying this as a constructive criticism... positive intent.
cheers, good luck.
author says:
reduced the eyes intensity ...thanks for the comments
Eladine, I am sorry I can not do the shading at this time. I got your suggestion, and will do the changes later, just for my portfolio. I really appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Jordy: Thanks.
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love this interesting image!!..
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Yep...this is really cool. Love the style and image overall. My only suggestion to you is that you perhaps change the top lips a bit in shape and brightness. Perhaps darken the top lips since they are further away. Maybe blur them more to create depth of field. Maybe you could distort/warp them slightly to look less like the same lips copied and pasted. Ya know? These are just suggestions to possibly create depth and improve. I really like what you've done, author! Really nice work.

EDIT: Lookin' great!
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