Ryasaurus for the model
Alexkalina for the knife
Designkryt for the Nightstand
sulfurix for the steak
darkrose42-stock for the texture (5 years and 2827 days ago)
Fun with an extremely informative SBS. I like that you modified her expression. I think it could be a bit more exaggerated, however (arched eyebrows, more sneer?). The drooping-knife element seemed weak, but then it occurred to me that an extremely pointy knife with perhaps an almost cartoony glint at the point would better fit your theme and balance the aggressiveness of the fork. The hand and forearm cutouts could use more feathering of the edges. The forearm shadows should get stronger the more under the forearm they are. Same for the food's shadow. But the more fundamental problem with the food is why would it make the diner angry? The notion of 'hungy' in your title suggests a large plate with a very small (but elegant as a commentary on the pretentiousness of fine-dining chefs [despite the lack of a white tablecloth on your table]?) portion might be more appropriate.
author says:
Wow! DanLundberg, thank you very much for your suggestions!
I'm self-taughted with photoshop and not always I have somebody to tell me how to improve, I really appreciate it!!
About your question: is not the dinner amount what makes her angry or hungry, in fact my mother tongue is not English so that is maybe the missunderstanding... I just wanted to make clear that the fork plus the knive are the responsibles of the girl being hungry (and so if she is hungry that makes her angry) and there is nothing to do with the amount of food.
excellent work good luck (you can easily thicken the plate by making a copy below it and lowering it with nudge to give the plate a tad bit more thickness) but that's just me, fun chop and very good job
Wonderful creation author. It looks great. GL
ohhhh I like! beautiful piece author! good luck.
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