you might want to fix the weird distortion on the giraffe, he's a bit distorted and stretchy, not a bad thing, but more locked in shape would help in your score, great Idea
author says:
Thanks for your help. I'll make the changes
(5 years and 2877 days ago)
author says:
I switched giraffe and was better, thanks for your opinion
Fun. I think a hint of hoof on the steering wheel would make it clearer that the giraffe is driving since I don't see any other driver—but maybe a driverless car in control (like Herbie, the Love Bug?) is the point and explains why the giraffe is less crisp than the car.
author says:
Excellent observation, like always your observations are. I put a motion blur in the giraffe because before it seemed less "moving" than the car. but I'm having trouble equalizing the sharpness of the objects of this image
Thanks for your help!
I like this image author...you've done a very nice job. I have a suggestion for you...if it is rain you were making...may I suggest that you use 'monochromatic' noise...a bit larger and then use motion blur the way that you have. Also blur the rain once you've done the motion blur. Just a thought.
author says:
Thank you for the suggestion, i was trying to make rain..
I did it how you suggested and it looks better, thanks for the tip
(i cant upload it with the new changes)
(5 years and 2872 days ago)
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Do you think shrinking the entire snake body would help with the balance? (thickening the upper body of course to match the distortion) just that snakes are usually thickest in the top of the pipe, not in the lower) but this is surreal so it is pretty much fair game, altering the background insect creatures so they aren't so duplicated would create more interest in the overall effect as well.. great job.. and GOOD LUCK always, IMHO
good composition.... but you must watch out the edges....
I switched giraffe and was better, thanks for your opinion
I mean the masking of giraffe...
I switched giraffe and was better, thanks for your opinion
Thanks, I'll do it.
you might want to fix the weird distortion on the giraffe, he's a bit distorted and stretchy, not a bad thing, but more locked in shape would help in your score, great Idea
Thanks for your help. I'll make the changes
I switched giraffe and was better, thanks for your opinion
Much improved!!! (was great before is just greater now
)
thanks
Fun. I think a hint of hoof on the steering wheel would make it clearer that the giraffe is driving since I don't see any other driver—but maybe a driverless car in control (like Herbie, the Love Bug?) is the point and explains why the giraffe is less crisp than the car.
Excellent observation, like always your observations are. I put a motion blur in the giraffe because before it seemed less "moving" than the car. but I'm having trouble equalizing the sharpness of the objects of this image
Thanks for your help!
not bad
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