I like what you've done with this, some great find of sources (specially the car!)
Maybe you can have a look again at the boy? It stands out IMHO, to big and the colors do not match, the 'photo filter' and/or the 'match color' function will probably fix that color problem.
Something I would do is to crop the right area out (up until the bottle), IMHO improves the composition. Some minor fast changes which improve your entry IMHO.
But like I said: I like it
author says:
Hey thanks spellweaver and robvdn..
I'll fix those things as soon as possible..
yes tiny changes can improve a lot!.. well said!
thanks for your comments.
author says:
Made an update,did some changes..thanks guys for the advice
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The mood isnt bad, but please spend some more time to cut out the model better, this is really too roughly done. Also, the begin of the poem is harder to read, cause the background is darker. Good luck!
without a high res, it is very difficult to judge the work.. the overall concept is a great idea, I just don't see what you are trying to achieve ... good luck
Not exactly a family picture, boy should have been made smaller, to fit size ratio of picture
I like what you've done with this, some great find of sources (specially the car!)
Maybe you can have a look again at the boy? It stands out IMHO, to big and the colors do not match, the 'photo filter' and/or the 'match color' function will probably fix that color problem.
Something I would do is to crop the right area out (up until the bottle), IMHO improves the composition. Some minor fast changes which improve your entry IMHO.
But like I said: I like it
Hey thanks spellweaver and robvdn..
I'll fix those things as soon as possible..
yes tiny changes can improve a lot!.. well said!
thanks for your comments.
Made an update,did some changes..thanks guys for the advice
Where is the sink!? Ok I hope he's not my next delivery boy, lol.
LOL Emik.. I don't want this delivery boy either on my next order of pizza..hahaaa
Howdie stranger!
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