Perhaps it was better to remove the reflection in the eye, just my opinion

Well done but i agree with lincemiope.

Really? I thought it would make it more realistic.. how about just turning it down a bit?

First, I deliver thee from black and white see how he is.
Then the pupil to make the contrast orange, white on a red dot, small, with small veins.
Symbolically, the eye is sweet, but also bloodshot.
Sorry if I said some stupid things, hello

my translate is daft
in italiano :

prova a levare tutto il riflesso bianco dal nero dell'occhio e vedi come sta.
Suggerivo di mettere un pallino rosso, con le piccole vene, nel bianco dell'occhio, da contrapporre alla pupilla arancio, in modo da fare simbolicamente un occhio dolce, ma iniettato di sangue.

maybe your translator is better than my

I feel a great job, neat, precise, well done

Nicely done! GL author

fantastic

Great concept - almost surprised I've never seen one like it before. Nicely done

almost creamy great job

Very original!

very strange, very weird, very not... usual....

I like it alot

Brilliant and creative idea!

I think it is great .... original and makes the viewer keep looking
I would of liked apples to have a thicker skin .... but they don't..

good luck

women are particularly at yin jang. nice job

Interesting but blurry.

great potential..... think you could have done so much more with detail on both sides of girl

good luck

Great find of picture... but that is all it is, right now, a great find... background and picture found on internet... I think you can do something more with this, maybe atleast make it into a yin/yang zin/zang symbol...

I concur with what you are saying and would totally agree if you had made the mechanical arm yourself; or if you added something additional to the background you created! (people fighting robots or something like that!)

I faved in advance hoping you would tweak it just a bit... not to my personal suggestions... but just look inside and give it the extra boost it needs to be super duper awesome!

I see your point! Sometimes the idea or creative imagination goes along way...

as stated earlier.. really a great picture and concept!

great picture ..Hate your background... my artistic bias..LOL
good luck

In my opinion, the girl in white should blend better with the bed, I think that adding a shadow on the right side of the dress could make it feel more realistic.

I really liked the good and bad sides of the bed idea..... perhaps a little more contrast ...I might have brought dark image closer and would have cropped out left hand drape ( Little things)

good luck author

Thanks for comment. i still working on it