(5 years and 2572 days ago)
I really like the notion of finding Eden. I think the composition could be more dramatic, however. Reducing the brightness of the cool framing cave would focus more attention on the garden. The Rule of Thirds would suggest moving what are now the centered elements of the garden to the left. I would also move 'Eve' as far to the right as possible consistent with retaining appropriate modesty so the waterfall doesn't look like it's cascading onto her head.
Hey Dan, haven't seen an entry from you in about two years, but you're mighty free with the advice...
Good integration of boy & rock, good lighting.
Thank you Bob... I changed part of the background. I thought an ocean was too much
Great diagonal composition but I think the boy blends too much into the background (I barely noticed him). The robot seems small and thus not particularly interesting. More robots (an army?) or a bigger (and brighter?) robot might be more compelling. A little tweaking could highlight the intended focal points and accentuate the drama.
Thank you for the feedback DanLundberg. I made some changes and threw some more highlights on the rocks as to reveal the boy
Convincing image. I like the way the boy and the warrior/robot look at each other.
Congrats, good work!
Congrats again Divair terrific work
Thanks a lot guys. Though there were only two more entries, fortunately I was competing with CMYK46 if not there wouldn't be much merith imo
Nice Job! Congrats on first Place and Happy New Year!
Howdie stranger!
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