Given your light source, the bird's shadow would be behind the girl.

As you have it, the bird's shadow is in front of the girl.

Oops.....now that's a huge Bird & Fish ......GL

I do not know what you want to tell in this work of yours. There are some things you can do:

1- IMO, the pelican is to big, (unless you want it to be big), it should show a shadow over his chest and underneath the wings. He is not facing the sun. If you draw a triangle from the center of the sun, to the place where the girl is sitting, that would be the area covered by the shadow. Bob, is telling you what to do. You are placing the shadow over the rocks, and that does not look right.

2- If you make the pelican smaller, then the perspective will go way back, an you will be fine.

3- I also think the fish is to big. These fish are smaller, BUT if you are trying to present your own idea, then it will be up to you to make changes, I just want to give my opinion. You'll get higher votes if the image looks nicer.

If you can't understand light sources, don't try to fake them. It doesn't look good.

Great work as always. Well done !

Congratulations.....!

Congrats!!

Congrats on a great week - I particularly liked this image

Congrats again !

Very nicely done, good composition and I like the monochromatic scheme!

Great find on the skeleton to give the image some drama.

amazing! maybe a little shadow for the bones would make this image pop more, otherwise still amazing

Great integration of source, I love red planet images.

Congrats for second.....!

Congrats!!

Congrats

Congrats, should have ben a clear winner.

Thanks for your comments and congrats guys

Next time edit your original entry instead of submitting a new one.

You should read this forum post: http://www.pxleyes.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=3933
Here you'll find links to help you learn.

Congrats!!

Congrats