Author, you have some lines visible in high res, you might like to have a look at. From the middle of the moon down, there are bits of a line all the way down, and also a small line on the back of the girls right shoulder. At the top of the moon a horizontal line right at the edge. Did you paint the moon yourself, or use a source image?

The moon wouldn't be in front of the clouds, and the lantern would be casting a highlight on the figure.

thx for the comments guys, removed the lines,moved the clouds, and cmyk46 if u look in high res m8, she already has a highlight on her dress from the lantern

You have a nice work here... GL

Well author, I'm not sure if my screen... but it appears very dark and hard to see...just check please...GL

Thankyou - I've checked it out on a different monitor and yes it was pretty dark! Updated.
And time to calibrate my monitor!

I think you may want to mess with the color balance here and give the overall image a more blue tone. I think that would really make this piece look like it was taken at night. Good luck author!

Dear author, in my screen it's a little bit dark ... perhaps it's only here.... GL

Nice job. The clouds seem to dominate the image. Maybe try and blend them into the image.