Initially I wasn't quite sure what the message was here.. but upon review I realized it's the guy leaping out of a mommy's tummy into death.
The other message I got at first was a delinquent dad abandoning his responsibilities. (I didn't realize it was a graveyard at first so I was a little like YIKES.) The first impression was a guy leaving his preggers girlfriend (after stepping on her belly) to the sin of the city (I thought the cemetery was an allegory to metropolis) .. with a very very very long leg..hehehe
That's what's so wonderful about this entry, it really makes you think. A LOT! hehehe... good luck author (Oh yeah, the work is MARVELOUS)
Just a little suggestion (DON'T MESS IT UP, IT's JUST FINE THE WAY IT IS) but only if you think it's worth your time. Just gently GENTLY arch her neck with puppet warp so she's looking at him and not just the sky. It is not important, but I think it would add to the overall balance. GOOD GREAT LUCK!!!
author says:
Thanks for your nice words and I'm glad my message got across. And your idea sounds really good, I'll try to work on it tomorrow. Thanks!
Great! One part bothers me though.. where the metal feeler is inserted into the tubular bit. Shading seems off to me? Excellent entry
author says:
Fixed.. you know I totally missed it because I was too busy trying to get that damn coffee cup to line up. Though it could be the Ace Inhibitor.. makes my nose and lips fall onto the keyboard.
Thanks so much for the suggestion Ozzie.. it does look much better now
Always great to have an extra pair of eyes
(5 years and 1190 days ago)
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I see what you are doing here author, my only suggestion is to get rid of the water spray around the sand water hole to give the water a better feeling of passing through the desert floor. At the moment it looks like the water is splashing all around but has no reason for being there. As it is a surrealistic image, it really doesn't matter but I find if the water looked like it was shooting straight through the sand it would make more sense and not just look like two photos on top of each other. ONLY A SUGGESTION.. It's fine just the way it is, but I'm just thinking of continuity. Good luck.
author says:
Right my friend. I like your idea, and I will take the water spray. Thanks....I like suggestions....
(5 years and 1192 days ago)
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Initially I wasn't quite sure what the message was here.. but upon review I realized it's the guy leaping out of a mommy's tummy into death.
The other message I got at first was a delinquent dad abandoning his responsibilities. (I didn't realize it was a graveyard at first so I was a little like YIKES.) The first impression was a guy leaving his preggers girlfriend (after stepping on her belly) to the sin of the city (I thought the cemetery was an allegory to metropolis) .. with a very very very long leg..hehehe
That's what's so wonderful about this entry, it really makes you think. A LOT! hehehe... good luck author (Oh yeah, the work is MARVELOUS)
Just a little suggestion (DON'T MESS IT UP, IT's JUST FINE THE WAY IT IS) but only if you think it's worth your time. Just gently GENTLY arch her neck with puppet warp so she's looking at him and not just the sky. It is not important, but I think it would add to the overall balance. GOOD GREAT LUCK!!!
Thanks for your nice words and I'm glad my message got across. And your idea sounds really good, I'll try to work on it tomorrow. Thanks!
Don't worry about it.. do it only if it works.. if you mess it up I'll give you a right SMACK BOTTOM (Shrek Reference) hehehe
Surprised this didn't place higher.. still a GREAT job
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