Good image, but give the truck's shadow less opacity.
author says:
I have this often, depending on the screen where you look on, it comes out different. On my desktopscreen it is not as dark as on a tablet or phone. Nevertheless I lightened it up a little hopefully it helps... thanks
I know this is nitpicking, but there's no visible light above the truck to account for a shadow, much less such a dark one. We should be able to see the white line & even some of the road texture.
author says:
Now I see what you mean, you were absolutely right, it's no nitpicking. Really appreciate your sharp eye! Thanks changed it now..
I enjoy the comments from CMYK. Finds things I never see. You really have the perspective down nicely and I love the green headlight. I could have done without the raven and would have toned down the texture a bit but I like this. The truck is killer and I wish I had one to work on.
author says:
Thanks wedoo2, the comments of CMYK are really helpful indeed !
The curve in the planes wing isn't really necessary but because this is surreal it's your choice. I'm just thinking if the wing was straight (proper) it would look like it's "ENTERING" the scene as opposed to being "WARPING IN" to the scene. Don't know if that makes sense but that's what I see. Take it with a HUGE grain of salt... hehehe Fun use of Polar Coor.
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Good work on the shadows and getting the background to show through the glass.
I like it,, good blending.
It's hard to get the background through the glass, you did a great job here. Maybe a little distortion from that background would be nice
Good job with the blending, good luck author
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