Yep, shadows should be more transparent. I assume you made the rocket...you have a stray piece of the shadow at the back end to remove, and I'd darken the background sky so the smoke trail is more visible.
Maybe you can adjust the arm towards the rope a bit in a more natural angle. She's hanging after all. There's also a black line around the moon, that should be an easy fix.
A suggestion to make everything better: make a new layer on top and use a 5px blur tool brush (check 'sample all layers') and go over the edges of the cutout shapes. This should make everything more together.
"Maybe you can adjust the arm towards the rope a bit in a more natural angle."
I was just going to suggest the same thing. Her arm should be morein an upward position like Teddy's.
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author says:
Ah ah, I've just finished doing it! just give me a minute to replace the chop thanks for your help and thanks Rob for the tip, I never thought the blur tool brush would work through a blank layer, it is amazing!
I like it too and the creative element is so good. As far as the photoshop chopping goes it all looks good to me and how wonderful it is to read all the suggestions given. A great site to learn from the best.
This is a well put together chop, lots of imagination and work put into it. Be that as it may, there is something about the shadows bothering me. Specifically the tones and consistency. It seems to me that those gun turrets, the ropes from the balloons, and the side of the ship need some shading. Also, I'd think there would be some shadows cast onto the fog from the different elements in the scene.
I like the mood you're trying to set, a few tweaks would bring it over the top IMHO.
Good luck.
author says:
Thanks Ichappell. I re-did a bunch of things. Too much to type out but it is all written out in the first step of the SBS. TY for the suggestions. I didn't do any fog shadowing though.
I really like the surreal dream like quality to this chop and I'm not so sure about shading because without it the end result is otherworldly. It is only an opinion on my part.
author says:
Image has been updated. the old version is in the SBS if you want to compare.
Thanks for your help with this. I didn't know what you specifically meant by "Play with the levels and curves", but I did darken the entire boat/sub some with Curves.
Nice Chop. Shadowing is a little dark IMO. Oh and it's "Memphis" without the 'N'.
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Yep, shadows should be more transparent. I assume you made the rocket...you have a stray piece of the shadow at the back end to remove, and I'd darken the background sky so the smoke trail is more visible.
yes for the rocket, I tried some fix.
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