Tinkerbell, Wendy Darling, and Captain Hook. This wasn't easy...
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Peter Pan - Keiichi Inoue
(5 years and 467 days ago)
Love the concept of snow white's downfall.
Only her shadow under her feet are missing, she is floating now.
use the same darkness as under the pallet she is sitting on.
and the background has some noise and snow white does not.. maybe a little blur, i mean like a minuscule adjustment, to loose this noise.. or sometimes "reduce noise" works also well in photoshop
Thanks Fred, you see I moved Snow White a bit, but didn't realize the shadows didn't follow I think she is grounded now.
I've readjusted them.
I liked the wall picture because of its grain and its grunge appearance. So I have added grain to the gnomes. I supposed that because Snow White was at the front she didn't need so much grain but you are right, she did. So I have added some grain to her, as if there were not enough in her bottle
like the smashing into the wall...but having trouble with sunk in on the corner of a building perhaps wing and hand sticking out or move to wall only
Please check the source image. It's only the shade of the wall that makes it look like she's on a corner. (Author, not the best choice of sources because of that optical illusion...).
I see it and yes the shade of the wall is a factor and the illusion but still original seems to have plaster edge ..which I assume the author fixed> I agree not the best choice of source and or placement. still nice work
This was very difficult for me to make. 11 days of work which took over my life. Finding those sources was a chore. I have no clue as to what would be a better source for incorporating Tinkerbelll crashing into a a wall with Capt Hook and others looking on.
But what I did in the meantime was to make the wall all one color and added another window with Peter Pan which hopefully will make the wall look flat. Did a little brushing on her hands to make them go more into the walll, but honestly I can't do any better.
I can say that I poured my heart and soul into this Chop and was one of the most time consuming pieces I have ever made @ 60+ hours.
Much improved...GL author!
Love the cartonish effect of the fairy hitting the wall, well done!
On other aspects I would have made other choices I think. I'm wondering if the 3 other figures are needed. You might have made the whole image stronger without them and focusing on adding other attributes instead.
Just my 2 cents
"I'm wondering if the 3 other figures are needed. You might have made the whole image stronger without them and focusing on adding other attributes instead."
Haha. I felt that all the way through, but I was committed to my original idea of having the others looking on. WTH... I went with your suggestion and what was always my gut feeling. Banzai!!
Looks better IMHO
Well done author
After all the work you put into it I belive looks much better IMHO
PS..I found the other characters a bit too "cartoonish" for this pic also and now your focus is centered on the crash
Appreciate your insight Majkman. A 2nd, 3rd, 4th set of eyes tends to help. As you do these things, you see them from your perspective. Something that looks flat to me (because I know the source images) can look like a corner to someone else for example. It's always a learning experience.
Could have done this so much better if I stayed with just the fairy from the get go. Haha. Such is life.
Well done on 1st!
Thanks. A depressing score.
Congrats BWR, don't be depressed, you're still first
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