Some high resolution would be nice, but from here it looks like you need to work a little bit on the colour matching, she looks very flat, maybe try bumping up the contrast? That's just my opinion. It's a very nice image, so good work, and good luck!!
edit: Very nice improvement, the contrast and colour now matches up really well. Good job!
Compare her dress to the white on the boxes. There should probably be a little more light on the dress in the lit lower areas. That being said, I think her scale is good & she should be a nice fit.
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Pointi55 and pingenvy thanks for help, I hope it will ok now.
The placement and blending of the girl is great. For the tracks I would suggest studying some photos of tracks with people nearby, or better yet, take some reference photos of your own. As it stands, the scale of the rails is like a child's ride at a carnival. I sometimes take photos just for contests so I can make comparisons and even use them directly. Good luck! You don't have a bad start.
Funny idea . I might have put the motioblur a bit differently (more horizontal) and mostly on the right side of the person since he's moving from right to left (no motion that fades out to the left side if you come from right). You maybe would like to give the bees a tiny bit of gaussian blur too. Good luck!
ouch ouch ouch ouch ouch (happened to my brother, he swelled up like a beach ball) ouch ouch ouch... Waz has a great Idea author.. the concept is AWESOME
Some high resolution would be nice, but from here it looks like you need to work a little bit on the colour matching, she looks very flat, maybe try bumping up the contrast? That's just my opinion. It's a very nice image, so good work, and good luck!!
edit: Very nice improvement, the contrast and colour now matches up really well. Good job!
Compare her dress to the white on the boxes. There should probably be a little more light on the dress in the lit lower areas. That being said, I think her scale is good & she should be a nice fit.
Pointi55 and pingenvy thanks for help, I hope it will ok now.
If you've ever been around beehives you'd know she's a bit small...fix that and you'll have a better pic.
cool its kinda artsee
CMYK46 thanks again. Her size fixed...
very good
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