Nice idea, mostly good, but the grass under 'death' looks too green and it doesn;t really match up with the rest of the grass, but it's a nice idea, soo good luck!
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touched up the gravestone a bit... (5 years and 3788 days ago)
Light source on figure is opposite light on tombstones, edges of cross need blurring, bottom edge is too regular, since it's on grass...
author says:
i'm gonna stick with the lighting...my light in the Bryce scene is placed to the left of the model, and that's where i placed my light filters as well....but i'll def work on the rest of what you mentioned...
The graveyard scene...I thought it would be an easy fix.
(Assuming the girl & cross are on different layers and the graveyard's behind them...).
author says:
thanks cmyk....i had to question cuz my original BG layer is the model scene...and i layered the graveyard on top, thus my confusion. It's a pretty simple do-over, so even if I don't do it for the contest, I want to do it for practice, so I can get a better perspective on lighting. i appreciate the tips....
while the idea is good and points for playing with the 3d programs, the poser and her tombstone look very blurry... but again, nice try, you will improve fast
author says:
thank you everyone for tips and advice; although i may not re-do this piece, i keep it all in mind for future work.
heroes, to emotional subject for me, lost many Uncles in WWII and never got to meet them, other then under the blocks of marbles, passed out at the Wall, simplicity was my entire goal, (also growing up Catholic and having major issues about cemeteries) (5 years and 3789 days ago)
Poignant message, but not sure much chopping involved of source?
author says:
You are exactly right MELLOW, I did NO chopping of source other then color correction in certain areas... I'm old Catholic school and didn't want my knuckles rapped with a ruler.. I just wanted to make a contribution and the idea was in my head and I couldn't get it out thanks for all your wonderful comments (I did fade his face into the back ground but he ended up looking like a very severe case of acne and he lost all his innocence .. thanks a gain everyone
while the thought is nice, we still need to remember this is a photoshopping contest and the rules of stock photos. Im careful about entering something that close to my heart as I get upset if someone is negative about an image, so whatever is said just take it with a pinch of salt goodluck anyway.
author says:
Olivia! Your comments are ALWAYS honest and from the heart... thanks you sweetie
Nice idea, mostly good, but the grass under 'death' looks too green and it doesn;t really match up with the rest of the grass, but it's a nice idea, soo good luck!
There's a square area around the lower right tombstone that needs blending, and you should do something to the skull so it doesn't look like plastic.
the image is ok
If I was that kid, I'd be miles away by now! Scary! Lol!
The tree is really bad cut o.o the grass on the skull guys feet is too bright!
a few different light sources there... good idea though, i would be sitting next to him lmao
Reminds me of Ghoustrider... Or something like that... lol
Howdie stranger!
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