The ceiling looks weird, not to talk about those lamps which show through. Very nice idea, but you need to work with the details. The perspective of the crumbling floor is also a bit weird. Also there is a strange black artifact on the picture, upper right corner? I vote later if you decide to work with the details.

ok thanks

fixt ceiling and the broken ceiling piece

LOL...you're CRACKING me up...and the boy is distorted.

You may have a reason for adding the boy, but I think it would be just as effective without the boy in the picture.

I suppose that falling broken ceiling piece doesn't show that black hole, since it's made of marble like that. And I agree with CMYK, boy is distorted.

nice!