This is quite shabby!!! Yuck!!! Poor me!!! Must ve done better!!!

needs better blending, good luck

Yeah!!! Did in twenty mins!!! Will try!!! Thanks!!!

'o' is invisible in 'smoking' - it will be 'smaking' or 'smucking' or 'smrking' and i k n o w someone can read from this even 'smbking'! fun! good luck!

quite the ugly.. can't really look at it to critique.. good job author.. now I gotta go revisit my lunch.. URP

Well its definately on theme, thats a really bad smile. Ok, so where are the sources? The ones for the teeth, lips, man?? The one listed for the cig - check with a mod, I am not sure its a legal image.. Nice idea. GL.

I'm not sure having colour lips on a monotone image is working...or the text on the image...but it's poignant and gets the message across...

Cigarette needs to be darken a little to blend better gl

Concept has potential. The headline text just states the obvious so it doesn't add anything.

Thats a hideous smile!!!! suts the theme.... but the work could be much improved... GL!!!

i agreed with Tapiona ...good luck!

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Erm, if the picture is black and white should the smile not be also?

nice theme

Yuck i think i would faint if i saw such thing in real lol