need to improve

Ok you've change it... Why?

very different effect.. it's weird.. but you just want to shave him LOL

hey, it is summer yet! good luck!

I don't get how this is on theme.

This is the new entry.

Great matching of perspectives. I think the edge between her feet and the pavement needs to be stronger, however. And if her shadow is towards us, why is her back lit? Nevertheless, while this may be a cultural contrast, I'm not sure this fits the 'reborn' theme as she could be contemporary despite the source's description of 'primitive.'