Good blend. Source pic is © Lars Christensen

the source pic is from dreamstime in the free images... that i have an account from.

check the shadow of the girls head

She's never gonna get a tan like that! Good Job.

Author, you need to work on the shadows a little. The shadow from the girl would follow the contours of what she is laying on, they would not be uniform.

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would be better if she was looking at something good luck

Maybe put her further down the beach to match the blur? Keep something in the foreground as the focus. Try and remove the highlights off the face??

whats she lookin at??

the idea is very good but i think u need to worker more, face is a bit blur and ligths also dt match so well