WHERE's the SOURCE???.hehehehe.. don't worry Author... I LOOKED at the SBS.. very nice work.. though I would suggest to make the blue upside down bun into the Water it looked like it would become in the SBS.. as this is only a suggestion, it will not change my vote (which is already very high. .good luck)

nice idea.

nice

Thank you, all. Golem, I originally WAS going to turn the bun into water. After implementing this, however, I felt that a snowy field had much more of an impact. Simpler, yes, but the plain white fields heighten the sense of lonliness and solitude. With water, there is a sense of exploration and wonder. I just can't think of anything more "vanilla" than snow. Thanks for the feedback, though! I always love how thorough you are with your critiques.

good idea

this is really COOL idea!