Climber edges up the branch, not realizing there is a potential problem ahead.
Thanks to David Niblack for the climber and bee images. (5 years and 3775 days ago)
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Nice image, the shadow is completely wrong.. i myself am not the best person to ask but i'm sure someone else will comment. As for the bee, it's a bit distracting from the main point you're trying to get across. Good entry otherwise. Good luck!
ponti's right. the bee shadow is too blurry (compared to the branch), it's not positioned right (should be directly in front of the bee) and it's not the same color as the branch shadow.
Would be better without the bee, and the climber's shadow needs to match the angle of the vine shadow...
Funny . If there's a shadow from the vine on the wall, then I also expect a shadow from the climber on the wall. Not the whole climber, but at least some of the body. Compare it to the leaves, just above the climber. Good luck!
Ok, I think I am getting the hang of the shadows -- obviously still a weak area for me. I put the climber's shadow on the branch itself (hard to see) and overlapping on the wall. Removed the bee, since it seemed to be distracting. Thanks for the constructive criticism -- helps me learn.
very good editing---
he he cute.
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