I think you need to try to match all the colours together, and add a few more shadows for the heart, the knife and the baby. Good luck!

thank you will make changes.

while this is a very emotional piece... You could make the message even clearer if you changed the chair into a rocking chair and made the knife less commercial looking,, (a dagger would be more emotional then a serrated steak knife and a rocker would connect the baby with the rocking heart.. but this is your vision.. so TAKE THIS ONLY AS A SUGGESTION... if this is the vision you wanted.. then by all means stick with it.. Just trying to help and god bless

EDIT: Sorry.. didn't look close enough to the high res.. but the DAGGER is MUCH better... once again.. god bless

it is a rocker. Golemaura... it was ment as the chair a mother would feed and nurse a newborn.. i love the idea of changing the knife. thanks.

thanks for the feed back i like the dagger better

beautiful work but i got to go cry now

i didn't even need to read your beautiful poem to see your sorrow! My heart goes out to you ! I love your image , good luck !

the sand below the chair is too mucha diff color from the dry ground other then that.. it takes time to give it a place but you wotn forget it...

thank you everyone for taking the time to comment. Eladine.. the colour under the chair is suppose to the the river of tears... hence the colour difference... thanks for the feedback.

Too contrived, but not bad.