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Amusing. Raise bottom of frame to make clear front of train sticks out far enough for smoke to be in front of frame. I think this would work better if the protuding tracks seemed three-dimensional (add left side to left track, terminate tracks with the cross-section you would see if you cut through them). And maybe eliminate the protruding gravel. Also, the protusion's shadow doesn't make sense, especially if the tracks are jutting out towards the viewer.

Interesting idea. Listen to Dan.

Congrats