It looks like neon swirls are some kind of new fad that's been happening lately. Guess what: it's meaningless and just distracts from the image. Sorry I had to pick on your entry author, but the neon swirl thing is just silly.

Yeah i think you were right. I was also feeling like it's too much. I 've worked on it a bit more. I think it's better now.

I like the disintigration effect, and i also like how you made those awful render clouds look good! I really like this entry. (Perhaps tone down the white streaks a bit?) Good luck!

please explain how you made the disintigration effect, i'm curious

The disintigration effect is made mostly by usind splatter brushes. Take the clone tool and start cloning next to where you need the disintigration effect to be. Another way to do it is by choosing the right brush and instead of clonning you just create a new layer and you use the brush anywhere in the canvas.Then you load the selection of the brush ,you copy any part of the image and you paste it on a new layer again .I think its easier and faster to do it by clonning and using the brushes to delete some parts and make it look like disintigrated.

i really like this entry it would be something for a sports shop wall goodluck.

wow i really thought this would of done better than 4th place.