Sorry but this is a pretty poor job, the cutting out was clearly done quickly and there is little overall asthetic appeal imho. There was a lot more potential in this tongue twister.

I agree, sorry. It looks very badly chopped...

EDIT: Better but.. just not very exciting, I don't know.

Pls delete this entry of mine.... They are so right... I was in a rush and bad mood. Pls

don't think they delete for that reason lol.... why not make it again just this time take your time

Keiley you are right... but this was like a revenge from the PS.. I made lots of nice entry but never make it top 3.... I felt like I am givin' up...

DONT GIVE UP! Seriously, everyone starts somewhere. The more you practice the better you become. The most you put photos up, the more creative critism you will get and learn from to become better.

Why not find nine nice nurses and put them around a guy

funny.... lol

That's what I was picturing Loopyluv, the pic of the guy smiling in the hospital bed is a good start - just find 9 different nurses (or a couple of different and manipulate them a bit yourself), and put them around him. Even a pic of a guy drooling would be appropriate

i know how you feel about never getting into the top 3... i can't get there either and I try very very hard myself unfotunately I don't get too much advice on my pics so its hard to see where i am going wrong. You will get there in the end just don't give up, because it's only yoruself that you letting down in the end

Thanx all of you.... Really. You've been like a family to me with these comments. Really thanks a lot.

Not the best of results, but really good to see youre taking some of the suggestions on board and playing around with things - the top 3's will come (hopefully for me too at some point

I hope Ray they'll put me in to third place if I deserved it........ Thanks....