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razvamioveni: for the pic of the cart. (5 years and 3548 days ago)
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Perspective on the cart and the ground is different and theres a shadow from the trees in the original picture under the patch of grass on the right so it looks like it;s floating. If you can adjust those two things it'll be a very nice image. Good job!
Thanks Ponti, I think the perspective, from my point of view,is right, the cart will follow a path, which, if you follow the lines, they will make a curve to the right, where the cart is. You're right on the shadow, will correct that. Thank you for comment.
you made the big tree disappear, but you left its shadow on the ground pay more attention to shadows, otherwise it's nice, i like it. good luck!
Shadow was corrected. I added more vegetation to the right. Thanks for suggestions and observation.
For me the perspective of the cart it's ok ( it's just imagining the cart going down a slope). But I think that bushes on the right side are a little blurred...
Thanks erikuri....bushes in the right side corrected.
Mw? I like it just move some edges of the additional grass! nice work :p
More corrections made....
fantastic...
Excellent corrections author.. (sorry to keep nagging) but on the right hand side the blending of some of the vegetation is a tad odd, maybe add a shadow underneath the vegetation and darken up the bottom. Again - great image, just a few slight alterations to make. Good luck author!!
Ponti55: Added the shadows underneath the bushes, and darkened the bottom. You are not "nagging" you are giving me suggestions for a better entry, and I appreciate that. Thanks.
Great work......and great corrections.....
I'm glad to see someone take all the advice on the chin.. great corrections - the image looks great now
looks good
Nice feeling to this but the cart path should be a bit narrower toward the houses. Otherwise well done.
Thank you for comments: Glockman: I think there is no much distance between the cart and the the end of the lines. It could have been narrower to the top of the little hill, but I think it looks ok, the way it is. As a matter of fact, it is to late to make corrections now...
nice one!
Excellent work, looks very convincing. Love the whole thing!! Best of luck!!
Congrats!!
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