nice, you can work more on the shadowing of the fence and other props used

nicely done.. but I feel u need to do a bit of work on the shadows of the guys.. you are showing on the fence in the same perspective as on the ground.. the shadows need a bit of distorting.. try a practical thing standing near a fence n u'll understand it..

Where's the wine bottle?

Thanks guys hope this is better.And jawshoewhah please look on table you'll see bottle of wine with napkin wrapped around it and look at sbs it shows everything by number in frame #9.

Nice try.....

Good work