Nice one! Love the snake lol. My only reccomendation would be to fix the right edge of the chasm a bit--make it crisper and sharper. As a chalk drawing, the edge shouldn't look too feathered.

well the edge would look feathered if the artist sat in a bucket of water and scooted their wet rump a long the edge,,, (good job author.. I personally have no clue how to start this contest) I've been searching through all my photos and I haven't a clue..hehehe.... GOOD LUCK!!!

big fix.. great job author!!!

The edge between the pavement and the chasm doesn't seem real -- and realism is obviously the whole point. Once it's truly realistic, a car driving over it would show that it's actually fake. Also, I don't get the climber's lost hand [I know that's the way he is in your source, but I'm trying to make sense of it here]. I think the snake could be a lot bigger (hard to tell what it is) and more colorful.

gamemastertips, Drivenslush and DanLundberg. I have removed climber, painted road line and increase the size of snake. Added walking women

this is frightenning ! great job though

to me this would feel more realistic if the center lines form the road were not there... granted sometimes the artist mimicked in this contest would leave portions of the road in for effect, but this does not feel like that is the case here... remove the center lines and i would totally believe it! GL!

Thanks bjaockx , I have removed road lines and also have made some other minor changes.

nice work good luck..

Fantistic!

this would creep me out

looks like a movie scene :P

Good good quite improved, author. Just one thing--by having the snake cross the edge of the hole, the snake would be a real-life one(which would be impossible if it were a chalk drawing). Not completely sure about this, though....thoughts? I may not know the full potential of these drawings lol.

Thanks gamemastertips, another fix

Lol you're great, author. Good luck!

Although the fix hasnt altered the overall look, IMO it could have stayed as it was, the extruding part of the snakes head would have simply been drawn on the right hand side of the road (avoiding overlapping the grass of course). Altering the perspective of a normally flat drawing and making things jump out from the ground is what makes these types of artists unique. Nice Entry btw

Best of luck to you on this very creative entry!