I think you've done a great job on the caterpillar, but the eyes really let this down for me, they just don't match the rest of the image imo. I'd also add more legs. Overall a nice job though.

Funny stuff!
I just think you have to work on shadow, it's a bit sharp; and mouth and tongue need a better chop/masking...

Funny

I agree about the eyes...mouth are just perfect...good luck author

Thanks for suggestions and support. I updated the image and I hope it looks a bit better.

hehe amazing gl author

love the expression

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