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Good luck with that...
Hilarious content, but execution could be stronger IMO. I would delete "Card to my ex!" and make it the title (without the the exclamation mark). Format the three purple introductory lines to the rhyming couplets identically: left justify by the image's left edge, initial cap, and end with an ellipsis (three periods). Plus in intro two I'd change "i" to "I'll" (with a cap I) and in intro three I'd capitlize both "i"'s. Start each couplet with an intitial cap, end each first line with a comma [first couplet is the outlier on these first two items], and end each second line with a period [final couplet deficient]. In couplet two, it's "I'm," "that's," and "I" (capital I's and apostrophes). In couplet three, I would replace "until" with "but." The simple white background is kind of boring. The lower dark-gray segment on the heart might be more interesting as a drop shadow.
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So... it means that he changed his mind, his side... Crazy!
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cool entry gl
good luck
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