sweet concept, excellent construction

Marvellous...

Oh, how nice!

Author, you've got some problems with shadows here: base on the wood, the light comes from the upper left downward to the lower right, so the shadows of all the 3 birds are wrong. Removing the shadows of the flying birds are easy but change the light casting on the standing bird is difficult, so I suggest you to flip these birds horizontally, they will be fit to the source. Also, the back scene should be blurred more and some tiny glowing spots on the water can help the viewers focus on the center of the image, where should be the main part of your image. Come to the positive points, you have a nice idea and you found a suitable sources (I especially like the standing bird ). Good luck to you

Good idea, but I don't think the vignette helps, and there are 2 different light sources.

Thanks langstrum, great suggesstion as usual. I have flipped birds, painted some light glow on water surface and blurred background.

Tthanks CMYK46, reduce vintagge.

Nice

Look very good author,i like changing perspective idea...good luck

as thye said the idea is very good ,but thinke about what langstrum said

great work author, love the mood

Nicely done.

good job, like this mood

nice job and good luck.

Very imaginative, wonderful execution......good luck on this.

Lovely concept and beautiful result.....G/L Author.

beautiful entry, author... love the mood and colors... GL