Candle - created by ONabil


Candle
Favs: 0SBS: 4Hi-resRank: 10/16Score: 53.3% (0)5831 views

(5 years and 3617 days ago)

1 Source:

avatar Lamantine
Lamantine says:

good idea, my only suggestion would be to reduce the opacity of the reflections and you'll have a great entry

author says:

thanks i fix it

avatar Lamantine
Lamantine says:

looks way better now

avatar Chalty669
Chalty669 says:

Overall nice entry with some nice reflections. Not sure what the the white line is going through the middle, but it's a bit distraction. Also a full resolution file would be nice.

author says:

white line is going through the middle i mean it the glass is Transparent
it is Separative between the wall and the table

avatar Chalty669
Chalty669 says:

Author, I understand that you were trying to show the transparency of the glasses by splitting the wall from the table. I would only suggest that you make the wall or the table a different shade or color instead of having the white line run all the way through your image. When I step back and look at your image my eyes migrate directly towards that area. There are plenty more details throughout your image which are overtaken by that line. This is just a suggest and after everything is said and done you have some nice work here. Good Luck!

author says:

thanks Chalty669 i fix it

avatar Chalty669
Chalty669 says:

Wow! Makes a big difference IMHO. Good Luck!

author says:

many thanks Lamantine and Chalty669

author says:

thanks

avatar itsdesign
itsdesign says:

good luck

Howdie stranger!
If you want to rate this picture or participate in this contest, just:

LOGIN HERE or REGISTER FOR FREE


Two Hourglasses Photoshop Contest


The guards of time
Theguardsoftime
by
Lelaina
18767 views
- final score: 64.2%

Time's Up
TimesUp
by
artist3001
19805 views
- final score: 59.3%

The Time It Takes To Grow
TheTimeItTakesToGrow
by
ponti55
11807 views
- final score: 58.9%

Meanwhile in the Desert
MeanwhileintheDesert
by
kevinice95
9052 views
- final score: 57%

Silent Inspection
SilentInspection
by
Drivenslush
8991 views
- final score: 55.6%

Always like Blue!!
AlwayslikeBlue
by
shaiju1974
4600 views
- final score: 55.4%

bedtime
bedtime
by
yllas
4719 views
- final score: 55%

Check Book
CheckBook
by
migue1ito
6433 views
- final score: 53.7%

Brick House
BrickHouse
by
migue1ito
4830 views
- final score: 53.4%

Candle
Candle
by
ONabil
5832 views
- final score: 53.3%

Time Waits For Nobody & Nothin
TimeWaitsForNobodyampNothin
by
HeinrichB
7202 views
- final score: 51.4%

Got Something For You
GotSomethingForYou
by
Lamantine
5921 views
- final score: 51.3%

Killer Dragons from SPACE!!!!
KillerDragonsfromSPACE
by
maplestrat33
8959 views
- final score: 50%

lady shower
ladyshower
by
radeon21
7244 views
- final score: 49.4%

True Story
TrueStory
by
Tip2Top
5875 views
- final score: 48.8%

Cheers!
Cheers
by
bunnyluvver210
4369 views
- final score: 42.9%

Howdie Guest!
You need to be logged in to rate this entry and participate in the contests!

LOGIN HERE or REGISTER FOR FREE