Very creative thinking! The bed looks good but the rest around it makes the image worse.

Are those lights above the bed? If so the perspective is off, instead of being above the bed they look like they are crawling to bed.

I agree with Chalty; I thought of something trying to reach the bed...

thanks for the comment. and the perspective is way off indeed. but i did it to make the picture somehow strange and creapy. and that you would get the idea that the 'lights' are hands that are trying to grab you.

nice one

good luck