skater - created by serialkiller


skater
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explanation in SBS (5 years and 3454 days ago)

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avatar DanLundberg

Cool idea, and distressing the left-side railing edge is a nice touch. But the shadow created by the skateboarder is not consistent with that created by the right-side hand rail. I like the graffiti, but it doesn't feel as if it's 'on' the wall [too intense], especially at the grout line between the blocks. I think more, and maybe more colorful, graffiti would add a lot -- and might even be a more compelling focus, relegating the skateboarder to a secondary role.

avatar wazowski
wazowski says:

Apart from what Dan says, I think there's something phyisically not completely ok. The way I see the source image, the skater is on the top of a wall (and not on the stairs itself). The arm from the skater however is already at the front of the right wall, while his arm is behind the body. I guess that arm wouldnt be visible from that angle. Just that . Good luck!

avatar migue1ito
migue1ito says:

nice one but i'd have to agree about the shadows....goodluck

author says:

I have made a little adjustments according to your comments. Thank you.

avatar swordfish
swordfish says:

all the best to u author ........... nice idea .............

avatar westfall
westfall says:

much better!..

avatar erathion
erathion says:

Fantastic job author...simple but great...best of luck

avatar RAZ0R
RAZ0R [banned] says:

avatar dollmommy
dollmommy says:

best of luck

avatar Kid
Kid says:

Wow, very nice idea!

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