Being that the sky is very dark, the water wouldn't be so light. Maybe make the foreground a bit more darker as well, it still feels like the sun is shining on the grass. Good try though author, you got rid of the rock and I like your clouds

Great idea, this could be really fun. Having more motion in the water spouts would make this have more visual interest. There also could be more of a visual relationship between the clouds and the spouts as well. Right now it seems like the spouts don't actually come out of the storm cloud the relationship between the storm and the funnel lacks gradation. also try to upload a high-res version, Many will give you a lower vote if you don't have one. But a GREAT start!

agrees with the gals.

gud luck author.......... i like d idea .......... all the best :

Idea is nice, but as the girls said, ocean is too clear for a dark sky... But GL!...