Surprise - created by Cherish


Surprise
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Hi ! This is my first entry, please be kind. Thanks :)

Credits go to~ReaperOfBlood , ~dazzle-textures and Ale_Paiva for stock.
(5 years and 3408 days ago)

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good work... for your firs entry...
i would only suggest to remove the shadows below the zip.. it looks like that the zip is floating rather than its pasted on the orange...

avatar ponti55
ponti55 says:

There is a tutorial for creating a similar image, if you used the tutorial be sure to leave credit

author says:

Thank you ankit for the suggestion Matteo, i did not use any tutorial

avatar Tuckinator

this is really cool! i would like if you could blend the zipper better! awesome! first entry! if you have questions on how to do that, theres tuts or you could maybe pm me but im limited to what i can tell you, welcome to the site!

avatar RayTedwell

Personally I would make the image bigger, and the zip takes too much focus and therefore looks a bit pasted on rather than being part of the orange. Perhaps if you masked out the sides of the zipper and left the teeth, or toned the colour to match the orange more.
Still for a first entry this is very nice!

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Widiar says:

Splendid idea. Gotta agree with previous commentators. A smaller zipper and better blending with the orange. Crop the image (to make it appear larger) and add some little extra the background and this will be a good one.

author says:

Following your suggestions, I changed the image a bit. How does it look now ?

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very well done.. loved the changes....

avatar Warlock
Warlock [banned] says:

Great image, have a couple of suggestions, the effect would be more convicting if the apple was tighter to the edge of the orange skin and there is a masking issue with the zipper I can still see the fabric edge……

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Widiar says:

Go with Warlock's suggestions. So much better with a smaller zipper, good improvements..

avatar RayTedwell

As usual Worlock has it spot on, good changes so far though.

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RAZ0R [banned] says:

avatar erathion
erathion says:

very nice work...good luck

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