wat's happening do you see me - created by jack2


wats happening do you see me
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Widiar says:

There are some very good parts, but the overall image looks quite messy and it's difficult to grasp the concept. I would lose the ground from the 'roof' part and leave only the clouds hanging there. Could also help, if you would blend only a finger or two of the hand into the 'screen' .. Cover the black background with something and fix the blurriness of the table and screen from the left side - and the perspective for the table - and this will be a good one.

author says:

ok widiar i have make the changes that you adviced me to .thanks for taking the time to give advice and not to criticies like many are doing here instead of helping and learn from eachother .thank you

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Widiar says:

Whoa, that was quick. There are still some minor tweaks, but let's wait what others have to say. Looking a lot better into my eyes already, now it's easier to grasp the idea of your box and screen. I like how people are innovative and try new ways of creating OOB images, this is one of the good tries. Remember we only give suggestions according to our taste, thou sometimes there are some 'laws' like with lightning and shadows. I always appreciate when ppl try and improve the pictures. You can always say 'I tried, but it didn't work or made it worse' for my comments, I'm sure some of my/our ideas sucks totally when we see the end results

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erikuri says:

I know you made a kind of popup image from the monitor screen. But IMO I think the flat image would be better, now it's a bit confusing to me. The effect of the hand get inside the screen is very good, but as Widiar said, the top is noticeable only in hi res. Of course, it's your entry, and doing (or not) the corrections is up to you. GL!

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Chalty669 says:

I really like the idea here, but I didn't really understand what was happening until I went to full view. I think its because you used different angles from the same shot. What I'm trying to say is it might look better if you didn't do different picture angles and instead used the normal shot and tried to make a glass box instead. I can visualize it in my head and would love to try it, but it was your idea and I wish you luck with it.

author says:

ok im gonna try to fix it i do not understand the glass box butt ima try som thanks

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wow, this entry is getting ripped to shreds by comments...gosh, give the author a break...very interesting idea author

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Widiar says:

Just trying to help.. for me this is one of the best ideas so far on this contest. It's a sign of a good entry usually, if people comment it a lot and give ideas to make it even better.

author says:

thanks widiar thanks to every body for taken the time i hope its better like this

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