Writing in the journal - created by Disco


Writing in the journal
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With thanks to: kthread for the picture frame, matsuyuki for the image of the hand and pen, and cone_dmn for the diary. (5 years and 3382 days ago)

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avatar neeraj55
neeraj55 says:

very nice ! good luck

avatar Chalty669
Chalty669 says:

I would've likee to see the white level on the paper a bit higher and maybe a photo filter to pull it all together. Good luck!

avatar erathion
erathion says:

IMHO this is not OOB image,this is hand that write through empty frames...any how,good luck author

avatar Tuckinator

the perspective of the frame that is nearest is wrong but other than that, cool image!

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Pen point is in sharp focus, so the writing under it would be too...

avatar erikuri
erikuri says:

Erathion is right; you need at least masking between frames and behind the small one to make the image look like OOB. Flip the big frame horizontally too, as Tucker said. A different color of background inside the frames will make the difference! GL!...

author says:

Thanks for all the feedback, CMYK46, I can't really do anything about the writing - it's as it was, so perhaps I should blur the nib of the pen a little? erikuri, will try your suggestion and see what it looks like - thanks!

avatar chromathoughts

try adding a white background tp the frame on right side, n as far as the pen is considered try blurring the tip of the pen , its a good entry, gud luck author!

author says:

Blurred as suggested by lots of folks! Thanks

avatar valzart
valzart says:

mazing sweetheART ;} happy hippy hugglez

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