In a Desert - created by vinshine


In a Desert
Favs: 3SBS: 5Hi-resRank: 4/9Score: 56.6% (20)17368 views

Sunset shot of an abandoned building in a desert. (5 years and 3365 days ago)

3 Sources:

avatar erathion
erathion says:

very nice work,great coloring...only thing that is wrong is shadow...light is come directly from the back of the pineapple,so shadow have to be in front...fix that author,this work is great...best of luck

author says:

Thanks Erathion

Corrected the shadow.

avatar erikuri
erikuri says:

Nice entry!

avatar DanLundberg

Tropical pineapple as a building form in the desert is an interesting concept. I'm afraid I'm going have to disagree with erathion, however. The light in Source 1 seems to be coming from the front more or less and the pineapple is lit similarly (as is still evidenced in the highlights in the leafy crown of your current entry). SBS Step 5 has good lighting to my mind, but nevertheless has some other problems: Pineapple shadow needs to be sharp, not vague, consistent with harsh desert light. Doorway arch needs both right and left sides. Similarly, faux right-side window arches require faux left-side window arches. (My solution would be no faux window arches.) Make the lighting more dramatic like your current entry (but without letting the pineapple blend into the background and without the black border). I think the interior ladder should be moved to the right so it's only partially visible -- or maybe just delete it as it seems kind of unnecessary without more interior light.

author says:

Thanks everyone.

Have made few corrections/changes. Hope it is fine now

avatar Clinge
Clinge says:

Very nice image author. Like it

avatar Tuckinator

very cool!

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SwaranjaN says:

Good image

avatar fasterlizard

Good one

avatar rupa
rupa says:

thats really good art

avatar George55
George55 says:

love it..... interesting job....gl

avatar hereisanoop

Congrats for the 4th place

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