Sunset shot of an abandoned building in a desert. (5 years and 3382 days ago)
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very nice work,great coloring...only thing that is wrong is shadow...light is come directly from the back of the pineapple,so shadow have to be in front...fix that author,this work is great...best of luck
Thanks Erathion
Corrected the shadow.
Nice entry!
Tropical pineapple as a building form in the desert is an interesting concept. I'm afraid I'm going have to disagree with erathion, however. The light in Source 1 seems to be coming from the front more or less and the pineapple is lit similarly (as is still evidenced in the highlights in the leafy crown of your current entry). SBS Step 5 has good lighting to my mind, but nevertheless has some other problems: Pineapple shadow needs to be sharp, not vague, consistent with harsh desert light. Doorway arch needs both right and left sides. Similarly, faux right-side window arches require faux left-side window arches. (My solution would be no faux window arches.) Make the lighting more dramatic like your current entry (but without letting the pineapple blend into the background and without the black border). I think the interior ladder should be moved to the right so it's only partially visible -- or maybe just delete it as it seems kind of unnecessary without more interior light.
Thanks everyone.
Have made few corrections/changes. Hope it is fine now
Very nice image author. Like it
very cool!
Good image
Good one
thats really good art
love it..... interesting job....gl
Congrats for the 4th place
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