happy moments - created by donarkz


happy moments
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avatar RayTedwell

I like the idea, but my questyion is if you are ripping the picture, why would her face still be underneath but in B&W? Perhaps it would be more effective to have her face blank and maybe an inverted (mirror image) of the smiling face on the back of the torn piece...

author says:

hehe @ RayTedwell: actually i do not have an intention ripping her face, it is actually a drawing of her face in a paper that is burnt a long time ago.

I did miscalculated something obviously

What i'd like to do is a "Force Perspective Photography" Effect..

btw thanks for the comment.

avatar RayTedwell

Ahh I see it now! My comment looks a bit silly now

What I might suggest then is trying to create a little more depth to show the distance of the old drawing and the photo. You could do this bu adding a shadow from the paper and hand, or adding a slight amount of blur to the photo.

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

Good effort, but you have too many gray tones in the "sketch," which is what is causing the visual confusion. Try adjusting Brightness and Contrast to make it more of a Line Art paper sketch, and adjust your burnt edges a bit, making them larger. They are too "lacy" at present.

You've gotten pretty close with the effect, though!

author says:

tnx guys i will try to change it a bit..

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