it doesn't make sense to why the nipple shows? it makes the art of the shirt kind of trampy..i really love the concept though!

I have to agree with Crystle. If you want to make it a shirt you need to significantly dull down or remove the nipple, alternatively remove the stitching and smudge the edges and call it body paint... then it would make sense that the nipple was still so prevalent.

More light on her dress would do good and somekind of distort ( either liquify, displacement or spherize) so it looks like it's on her.
If you wanna keep the nipples make them look like they are on purpose: place some vivid colour around them or dark lines from it like a sun, or something like this: http://shrani.si/files/rozeta10wq4.jpg
And there goes the 3rd comment about nipples, lol.

Now that's something I wouldn't have thought of! Good work!

Thanks for the comments all of you.
RayTedWell you said ''If you want to make it a shirt you need to significantly dull down or remove the nipple...." But why ? Aren't shirt transparent ?

Not sure if I like this or not but it seems quite well done. There is just something about it that doesn't quite work for me. But it is interesting and I came back for a second look and believe me it wasn't the nipple I came back for

Creative idea, but I totally agree with Ray Tedwell.