
A paper swan must have freinds too. (5 years and 3396 days ago)
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It looks a bit floaty at the moment, a bit of shadow on the ground and a few pieces of grass showing infront of the swan would help give it the impression of sitting on the ground.
why not putting it on the water..i think that would be better..what do u think?
Thanks Ray, I fixed it. I never thought of that, but from now on I'll try to blend things into the pic. Wrock, mmmmm nah, I thought about placement and if it was on water it would sink. You probabley have more imagination than me.
The swan still has a lightly blueish tone. I suggest to take a look to this:

http://www.worth1000.com/tutorials/162206/introduction-to-match-color
It is a very useful tool and may help. The tone is the only flaw I see here
Nice job author, looks better!
The paper swan is lit from the opposite side of the real one (look at the shadow beneath the real swan's neck).
Mossy you are right. Didn't notice. I will look at that tutorial Syntek thanks. It does look better.
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