where is my sky - created by nanaris


where is my sky
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I know the shadow is not ok, so any help is welcome. (5 years and 3239 days ago)

3 Sources:

avatar itsdesign
itsdesign says:

great use of source

avatar layerstack

cool idea GL

avatar dekwid
dekwid says:

I just wonder about the model,....dont you think that she should be bit smaller or that flying thing in a higher position or ......aarggh.....maybe it is just my eyes that are wrong to see the compo,.......but one thing for sure it is great work,.....

author says:

I didnt think of that, the model, but yes I will try to make different adjustments this week on this, thanks dek !

avatar Drivenslush

looks A LOT like a book illustration!!! Kudos!!! author.. good luck

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Good image. The tentacle behind the figure makes it very hard to judge the shadows but for sure the dark comma shaped shadow to the right of the figure on the ground needs to go. You're on your own for the rest.

avatar greymval
greymval says:

Hey author, great work, my gf loves it.
Tentacles' shadow should be united with the main shadow which should be a perfect elipse. Because of the angle of the light you won't see the projection of the upper side.
Imo, it would add a great effect to make a shadow of the bubble as well, use this as reference:
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2530/3676289691_7fd9418923_o.jpg

author says:

thanks guys,and greymval thanks for the advice!

avatar Androla
Androla says:

interesting!

avatar greymval
greymval says:

It definitely looks better, good job!
I don't wanna be pushy, but you should know that the shadow for a suspended object equals the length of an object when light source is above.
So the dark elipse should be same length as the ufo, and the light elipse same length as the diameter of the bubble ( which is an energy shield, right? ).

author says:

ooo,,,
you are right againnn I spend a lot just for these shadow

avatar ponti55
ponti55 says:

I love it. I love the concept, i love the execution and i love the title. Really well done author

avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

Wild! GL!

avatar erikuri
erikuri says:

Very cool surrealistic image!

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Author, here's a good link on casting shadows.
http://www.photoshop-pack.com/details/Casting_Realistic_Shadows/11041
I know there are others, but I can't find 'em right now. Good luck!

avatar DanLundberg

Love the illustration look. I personally don't get the title.

Shadows continue to be a problem. The figure's shadow seems to be cast in a different direction than the UFO's. A line drawn from the center of the UFO's shadow through the center of the UFO itself doesn't continue on through the center of the light source. The tentacle shadows don't blend that smoothly into the UFO body's shadow.

With the strong back-light source, the front lighting of the UFO (and especially its underside and the tentacle connections) and the side/slightly-front lighting of the figure seem unnatural.

author says:

cmyk: thank you for the link , it was usefull !
dan: the title cames from buble , if you look at source 3, the sky is in the buble but I blend it at hard light mode and I losee the shape of the clouds, I think I will change this too
for the shadow you are right, but I know now what the problem was
the proble is the shadow of the girl in originaly source , I manipulate the photo ....but I didnt manipulate the shadow og the girl!
I think that if I wash out a little the shadow of the girl and with the right perspective for the other shadows that will be much better!I will try.
Thank you again all, I learn a lot from this entry and this is good!

avatar erathion
erathion says:

Very very nice work author...i did not saw previous edition,but this one look very good...best of luck

avatar derdevil
derdevil says:

Congrats on second !!

avatar erathion
erathion says:

Congrats...so cool work...

avatar RichieMB
RichieMB says:

Congrats for 2nd, nice

author says:

thank you!

avatar erikuri
erikuri says:

Congrats!

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