You got the skin and clothing spot on! I'm not sure about the really bright white eyes though.. maybe add a little shadow and depth into them.. GL!

I made a little change,hope it is better now...

This is a great image, but IMO whites of eyes are never pure white...there's always a touch of color. Look at other high res pics of eyes (RGB images of course) and see what I mean. It's a subtle difference, but would make your image almost perfect. GL author!

ok,I throw some color in,hope it's better...

The eye whites are still too bright white. But the skin coloring is very good.

IMO the eyes are much better. Again, GL author!

Very very nice work author...best of luck

Nice source choice author. Like the color selection on dress. Eyes stand out. Very intense compared to the original. Cool ! GL

nice job... all the best