wow cool

In her tutorial, madalina had some compositional tricks that she did not explain:

- those branches, create some sort of dynamic frame;
-the moon covered by the wing is the first checkpoint- it's not random that you find it in the lower 3rd of the image.
-pigeon has orange, to make a chromatic contrast, etc,etc.

The right half of your image is unatractive- compositionaly speaking, therefor i think that if you would crop it in half and keep only the left side, i would look so much cool.
Rotate that lightning strike 45 degrees.
You could also add a bit of orange on the pigeon.

Try it, and if it doesn't look better, never listen to me again

agrees with grey

thank you Greymval....made changes...thank you

It looks beautiful.

The image looks badly composed, although it has improved by adding color to the bird.

When you adapted the tutorial to include the house, you changed the overall composition.

The branches in the tutorial "framed" the focal point (the colored bird). Your house, with parts of another house on the side, throw the focus off the bird, and visually "weigh down" the image at the bottom. I would suggest eliminating the house(s) entirely.

thanks Mossy...this is my very old work done in 2009 ... thanks for ur comments.. i have the other version too with the same background also...i thought it would be too similar....i will add it in my sbs..

I have made changes again....thanks for the suggestions all...and thanks to locale for his suggestions on my entry..

very nice

Ooooo, great improvement The bird resembles a little bad angel

Very nice piece author...gl